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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > 8 shots from Rancho Los Amigos (Viewed 171 times)
Minister Mud 


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8 shots from Rancho Los Amigos
< on 10/13/2006 8:45 AM >
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8 shots, respectfully. Any suggestions or comments are appreciated.
Thanks--
Kade


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mortimer 


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Re: 8 shots from Rancho Los Amigos
<Reply # 1 on 10/13/2006 10:09 PM >
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On almost all of these, I'd like to see the angles a bit straighter. 2, 3, 4, and 5 are all really close to straight on, but not quite, they'd be better way off, like 6, 7 and 8, or dead straight on.

Colours and tones look good in all of them, but there's a few odd crops. 4 would be better with the whole door, although I really like the clean stripe on the floor. 5 would be better with the little window section on the top cropped out, and a bit more radiator.

6 I like as is, 7 is really nicely executed, just not the most compelling subject. 1 is almost there, but something's a bit off. Maybe tilted a bit too much clockwise, and the edge of the sink on the right would have been nice, but I like the idea.

Big improvement from the last batch, keep it up.

yep.
Minister Mud 


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Re: 8 shots from Rancho Los Amigos
<Reply # 2 on 10/13/2006 10:34 PM >
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thanks for the advice. I think I may make a few adjustments, just to see what you're talking about. If I do, I'll be sure to repost them to share the results.

-K

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