|
|
|
UER Store
|
|
order your copy of Access All Areas today!
|
|
|
|
Activity
|
|
801 online
Server Time:
2024-05-15 02:59:01
|
|
|
Rinker's Revenge
Location: Formerly MSP, now PDX Gender: Male
Oh yeah!
| | | 5 submissions to be torn apart < on 1/7/2006 1:17 PM >
| | | I'm pretty new to photography and looking for any kind of feedback. They're not all UE, but whatever. Bring it on.
|
|
Macsbug Noble Donor
Location: St. Paul, MN Gender: Male
Safety First!
| | | Re: 5 submissions to be torn apart <Reply # 1 on 1/7/2006 6:42 PM >
| | | I like what you did on the Devil's tower one, it seems like a filter (red?) might bring out the sky some more, but I don't know if that would really help much or not, I'm no B+W expert. I like your positioning for the Minnehaha falls photo, I think the silhouetted foreground works well. The tailrace photo, I think I've taken something almost identical, and so has somebody else - GreyKat or Gatsby, and I haven't been happy with the harsh contrast between the lit and unlit areas. I'd really like to see the further in sections of tunnel lit too, maybe click the shutter from inside the gate, and run away from the camera popping flashes. The first one doesn't do anything for me. Overall cool stuff.
"Believe those who are seeking the truth; doubt those who find it." |
|
brendan
Location: Toronto Gender: Male
| | | Re: 5 submissions to be torn apart <Reply # 2 on 1/8/2006 7:07 PM >
| | | The first one is a bit too flat, it looks like you're just using the on-camera flash in the dark. Try lighting that type of thing from the side, so the shadows can bring out the shape and texture of it. I like the concept of the second one, I feel like I'm coming out of a clearing in the woods and finding the waterfall, very nice. It looks like it really could have benefitted from using a tripod, nothing in the photo is sharp, and so you've got nothing to contrast with the moving water, which is your focus in the image. I like the ring of light in the third, but that's really it. The dark fence in the foreground really bothers me and makes the photo hard to look at for very long. Again the fourth could have used a tripod as everything looks to be a bit blurred my camera shake. Also a bit darker photo may have suited this well to get some more contrast going on. As it is it looks very flat and boring. The last photo is a very nice low, wide angle shot, and the row of trees bring your eyes right towards your focal point in the center. Those branches in the lower right are really bothering me though, because they're pushing their way right in front of your subject and end up very distracting. Maybe if you'd walked forward a few paces past them you could have had a much cleaner image with more impact. The black and white suits it well but you really need more contrast; right now there is nothing black or white in it, only flat grey.
http://www.morebrendanplease.com |
|
andrea
Location: Baltimore MD Gender: Female
Apparently, I am heinous.
| | Re: 5 submissions to be torn apart <Reply # 3 on 1/8/2006 9:02 PM >
| | | Posted by Rinker's Revenge
|
Where is this place if you do not mind me asking, I think I have been there but I am not sure....
This isn't boot camp and you are not a ninja. But you sure look like an idiot in that outfit. |
|
Rinker's Revenge
Location: Formerly MSP, now PDX Gender: Male
Oh yeah!
| | | Re: 5 submissions to be torn apart <Reply # 4 on 1/10/2006 2:23 AM >
| | | Thanks a lot for the feedback guys. Good stuff.
Posted by andrea Where is this place if you do not mind me asking, I think I have been there but I am not sure....
|
That's Minnehaha Falls in Minneapolis.
|
|
andrea
Location: Baltimore MD Gender: Female
Apparently, I am heinous.
| | Re: 5 submissions to be torn apart <Reply # 5 on 1/10/2006 3:25 AM >
| | | Ah ok, I only saw it during the day. That is a pretty cool little area. But there were like 800 children there when I was, so that took a little something out of it :p
This isn't boot camp and you are not a ninja. But you sure look like an idiot in that outfit. |
|
Noah Vale
Location: Portland, Or
It's nobler to never get paid, than to bank on shit and dismay
| | | | Re: 5 submissions to be torn apart <Reply # 6 on 1/10/2006 4:33 AM >
| | | I really like the colors in the waterfall shot. Is that natural light? It's very saturated and velvia-ish.
"Dallas is a magnificent and wide open city, and I'm deeply envious of any urban explorers who have the good fortune to live there." -Ninj. |
|
Rinker's Revenge
Location: Formerly MSP, now PDX Gender: Male
Oh yeah!
| | | Re: 5 submissions to be torn apart <Reply # 7 on 1/11/2006 4:08 AM >
| | | Posted by Noah Vale I really like the colors in the waterfall shot. Is that natural light? It's very saturated and velvia-ish.
|
I took the shot at night, but there's big orange flood lights at the top of the basin that shine down. So the reds and oranges were already there, but i did increase the saturation just a touch for a bit more color.
|
|
|
|
All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire.
To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site:
UER CONTACT
View Terms of Service |
View Privacy Policy |
Server colocation provided by Beanfield
This page was generated for you in 125 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 741774648 pages have been generated.
|
|