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Infiltration Forums > UE Photo Critiques > Critiques from recent shoot?(Viewed 1984 times)
kabdad location:
Georgia - Mostly
 
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Critiques from recent shoot?
< on 2/22/2021 1:13 AM >
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1. School
Ensley1 by kabdad, on Flickr

2. Office
Bullock3 by kabdad, on Flickr

3. Plant
Bullock2 by kabdad, on Flickr

4. Field
MB3 by kabdad, on Flickr



DescentOnARope location:
Long Island, New York
 
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Re: Critiques from recent shoot?
<Reply # 1 on 2/22/2021 1:39 AM >
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Very nice colors and tones, just the right amount of contrast. The first two could stand to be squared off, and while the angle looks deliberate, I don't know if it really works, especially for #2.



Urban Downfall location:
Montréal - Qc
 
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Re: Critiques from recent shoot?
<Reply # 2 on 2/22/2021 2:03 AM >
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I think the tone and lighting is very good. Composition is good, i would say just focus more on your lines (horizontal/vertical on your next shoot.

Vibe in the no2 is very nice, good shot.
(this one would have needded to be tilted just a few degrees down)



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Sturks location:
Columbus, OH
 
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Re: Critiques from recent shoot?
<Reply # 3 on 2/22/2021 9:29 PM >
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I like what you were going for in #3



roue_libre location:
Tio'tia:ke / Montréal
 
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Re: Critiques from recent shoot?
<Reply # 4 on 3/13/2021 6:08 AM >
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I really like the ambiance and colours. But as others have said, the edges of your photo must be parallel to the horizon or other salient horizontal/vertical features. If you're going for a tilted effect, then really go for it. It's all-or-nothing: it can't look like a careless composition.

I'm still pretty impressed though!



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The Files location:
North Carolina, USA
 
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Re: Critiques from recent shoot?
<Reply # 5 on 11/1/2022 7:19 PM >
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Wonderful pictures. I love the first one. Theres just something the moss that makes it a perfect mix of industry and nature.



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