I don't know if I should be commenting this. I'm gonna try to be constructive on this one and ignore the facts that you revealed not one, but 4 entrances.
- Your sound is really bad. A simple Lavalier plugged to your smartphone is 15$ and will avoid us to hear all the hazardous cut you've made. And probably hear you better when you're in the middle of a big room with echo.
- Music is too loud we can't hear you. And too "stressful" for nothing, but this is your editing choice.
- Panoramic views are too fast sometimes.
- Blur is was bad made, we can see details when you move the papers + the blur is still present on frames before and after the sequence.
This is the most jarring part of your videos, and the easiest one to do, I often fall prey to the fast pans myself. One can always speed up a pan that seems too slow in post, but you can't do it the other way if there aren't enough clear frames.