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This was taken a while back from a cellphone before I finally bit the bullet and bought a proper camera. I did make some edits to the picture in lightroom. Despite being one of my earlier shots, I am still pretty happy with how it has aged. Any and all feedback is appreciated.
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is this inside of a prison?
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Posted by RescueMe1060
is this inside of a prison?
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No, but I can definitely see how you could get that impression. This was taken at an abandoned school. The building itself was a bit dated, but it was closed due to a shortage of funding.
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This is a really good shot. Good composition, exposure, lighting. I like it.
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Posted by kabdad
This is a really good shot. Good composition, exposure, lighting. I like it.
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Thanks man, I appreciate it.
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Nice shot! Composition is dope. The only critique I have would be to aim the camera juuuust slightly higher so the edge of the basketball hoop (your subject, I'm assuming) isn't so close to the edge of the shot.
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thats a super good shot keep up the good work! (what camera you used?)
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Contrast curve looks off...
Just when I thought I was out... they pulled me back in.
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Posted by intricatexplorer
Nice shot! Composition is dope. The only critique I have would be to aim the camera juuuust slightly higher so the edge of the basketball hoop (your subject, I'm assuming) isn't so close to the edge of the shot.
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Thank you! Yeah, ideally I would have shot this with a wider lens as I wanted to include the basketballs on the floor within the shot too. Unfortunately at the time I was only exploring with a cellphone so this was the best I could do. I believe the actual net does align pretty nicely with the rule of thirds, and I would say that overall the graffiti under the basketball hoop ended up being my subject more than anything else.
Posted by skythekidRST
thats a super good shot keep up the good work! (what camera you used?)
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Thanks, it was just shot on a Galaxy S4. I would've had a proper camera if I had done this explore only a month later.
Posted by blackhawk
Contrast curve looks off...
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Yeah I agree, unfortunately I could not perfect this as much I would have liked. It's definitely easier with a proper camera and shooting in RAW.
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I rather like it. The red of the hoop and the net itself really stand out!
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Posted by Gothic Ghoul
I rather like it. The red of the hoop and the net itself really stand out!
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Thank you. I generally strive for an urban desaturated look in my edits with an emphasis on some of the colors (mostly red in this case).
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