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Infiltration Forums > UE Photo Critiques > Critique me up(Viewed 1468 times)
mulletcat location:
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Critique me up
< on 2/11/2017 12:15 AM >
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Took some un-edited photos in a construction site with my LG G5 camera. I wasn't able to get in with a tripod so they're not perfect but i'm hoping to go back this sunday with a tripod and take them again but with some improvements

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Gym shot 1

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Gym shot 2

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Gym shot 3

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Don't know what part of the building this will be but the red lights and blue windows really seem to work in my opinion. I could be wrong here so if I am give me some tips/pointers.





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Lachy location:
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Re: Critique me up
<Reply # 1 on 2/11/2017 12:17 AM >
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I think you should link it to a flickr or something of the sort because we can't see the full uncompressed image.



mulletcat location:
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Re: Critique me up
<Reply # 2 on 2/11/2017 12:18 AM >
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Posted by Lachy
I think you should link it to a flickr or something of the sort because we can't see the full uncompressed image.


alright, I'll try

That or i'll post them on my IG and link it here



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Re: Critique me up
<Reply # 3 on 2/11/2017 1:31 AM >
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Square up the shots.
The WB looks off.



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Re: Critique me up
<Reply # 4 on 2/11/2017 1:55 AM >
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Posted by blackhawk
Square up the shots.
The WB looks off.


I'll try to do that, whats WB?



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<Reply # 5 on 2/11/2017 2:10 AM >
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Posted by mulletcat


I'll try to do that, whats WB?


White balance.



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Re: Critique me up
<Reply # 6 on 2/13/2017 4:55 AM >
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1 & 2: They aren't level. Your lens has made straight lines curved - look into profile correction in Photoshop or Lightroom etc. The light is kinda boring and the ground being just.. muddy.. makes getting close to it detrimental to your shot. Might be better if you were nice and high so we could focus on what's further back in the image.

Why are the 3rd and 4th shots like 16:9 vertical aspect ratio? Feels weird pretty much everywhere except full screen on an iPhone, which is hardly a benchmark for photography.

Try getting close to shit. But no so close that it just looks fisheye-y.



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