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goldpeach   |  | 
explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
< on 12/25/2015 10:06 PM >
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all shot with 35mm film. sorry, they aren't organized correctly.

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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 1 on 12/26/2015 8:23 PM >
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Since this is the critique forum, I'm going to be brutally honest. These all look like snapshots to me. Lots are crooked and seem to have no thought behind composition. I would suggest looking for some beginner's resources/tutorials on composing a shot.


I think you need to be a little more selective about what you shoot. If you're just trying to document your explore, that's fine, shoot everything. However, if you're trying to pass your work as something more artistic than that, then you should choose what you shoot a little more carefully. Honestly, 2-6, 8, and 9 I probably wouldn't have even taken pictures of. They seem like uninteresting rooms with bad lighting and not really worth the effort it would take to get a good shot of.


I do think, content-wise, 1 and 7 are great shots, but again, the compositions seem off. 1 seems oddly balanced and 7 I probably would have gotten in a little closer for and not allotted so much empty space.

Kudos to you for shooting with film though. Us digital photographers are spoiled with our unlimited shots and easy to edit RAW files. I know I personally would struggle quite a bit more with film.




goldpeach   |  | 
Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 2 on 12/27/2015 3:43 AM >
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Posted by DawnPatrol
Since this is the critique forum, I'm going to be brutally honest. These all look like snapshots to me. Lots are crooked and seem to have no thought behind composition. I would suggest looking for some beginner's resources/tutorials on composing a shot.


I think you need to be a little more selective about what you shoot. If you're just trying to document your explore, that's fine, shoot everything. However, if you're trying to pass your work as something more artistic than that, then you should choose what you shoot a little more carefully. Honestly, 2-6, 8, and 9 I probably wouldn't have even taken pictures of. They seem like uninteresting rooms with bad lighting and not really worth the effort it would take to get a good shot of.


the rooms were like pitch black so i couldnt really see anything when i was inside them ;/ but i posted the photoset on tumblr and it got 500 reblogs so im glad lots of other people liked it at least. btw wats composing mean? ty xoxo.



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 3 on 12/27/2015 4:06 AM >
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Comments:
- Ask yourself what is the subject of each of these photographs, and decide if that's obvious in the photos.

- If the photos aren't crooked on purpose, then they are crooked by mistake. They shouldn't be crooked by mistake. I don't see any reason for any of these to be crooked, so I'm assuming it was all a mistake. Work on that.

- Google "photographic composition" and learn what they have to say. There are lots of resources out there.

- Popularity is not a sign of quality. I know you added a to that comment, but it is something to keep in mind.



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goldpeach   |  | 
Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
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Comments:
- Ask yourself what is the subject of each of these photographs, and decide if that's obvious in the photos.

- If the photos aren't crooked on purpose, then they are crooked by mistake. They shouldn't be crooked by mistake. I don't see any reason for any of these to be crooked, so I'm assuming it was all a mistake. Work on that.

- Google "photographic composition" and learn what they have to say. There are lots of resources out there.

- Popularity is not a sign of quality. I know you added a to that comment, but it is something to keep in mind.


Hmm. I think we have different aesthetics. Lmao.



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 5 on 12/27/2015 8:31 PM >
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Based on your responses it seems like critique isn't what you were looking for. You should stick to posting your photos in the ue photography section.



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 6 on 12/28/2015 3:23 AM >
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Posted by goldpeach
Hmm. I think we have different aesthetics. Lmao.


Actually I would take what Yokes is saying to heart, this is a man who is an amazing photographer who understands photography. He's taught me many things in regards to photography. Also Dawn is 100% on the mark also.

These are snapshots.

Probably the one one really with some redeeming qualities is Number 7, it's decently composed, but it's slightly out of focus (could be the camera or the scanner) and you're loosing some detail in the highlights (again could be the camera or the scanner).

What camera and film stock are you shooting with? What sort of processing and scanning as well?



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 7 on 12/28/2015 1:19 PM >
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Any disposable film shot with a vintage look will make the Tumblr people horny. Whether it's a photo of an abandoned amusement park or your own poop doesn't matter to them.

I think everything has been said already. I don't even think your photos are bad, they're just not something you should ask critique for. Better accept that you're taking snapshots, which are perfectly fine as a memory of fun times but not quality photography.



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 8 on 12/28/2015 4:05 PM >
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Posted by goldpeach


Hmm. I think we have different aesthetics. Lmao.


Evidently. Since you're not seemingly interested in constructed criticism (i.e. the point of posting them in this forum so that you can learn how to be better in the future), I'll just say that these have no redeeming qualities whatsoever. Like, literally zero. I'm not sure how I would term the aesthetics of them... maybe early 1980s Terry Richardson porno shot by a blind person? If that's what you're going for, you nailed it so kudos. If you don't want to be a good photographer, then great you're already there! If you do, then my suggestion is to accept some advice from several people who actually know a little bit about photography and film.



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goldpeach   |  | 
Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 9 on 12/28/2015 8:32 PM >
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Evidently. Since you're not seemingly interested in constructed criticism (i.e. the point of posting them in this forum so that you can learn how to be better in the future), I'll just say that these have no redeeming qualities whatsoever. Like, literally zero. I'm not sure how I would term the aesthetics of them... maybe early 1980s Terry Richardson porno shot by a blind person? If that's what you're going for, you nailed it so kudos. If you don't want to be a good photographer, then great you're already there! If you do, then my suggestion is to accept some advice from several people who actually know a little bit about photography and film.


LMAO. please forgive me for not taking the criticisms of a 40 yr old man who describes himself as a "fedora and bow tie enthusiast" seriously... your photos are a dime a dozen for guys into urbex and they have like 3 likes each. kinda ridiculous that you get so hurt by someone saying they have a different aesthetic that you have to freak out and be like "ALL YOUR PHOTOS ARE TRASH THEY HAVE NO REDEEMABLE QUALITIES" (like are you ok? do you need anger management?) yet that photoset probably got more attention/recognition than all your flickr combined. because you have no originality and everything you do is generic and boring. you dont have your own style at all. search urbex on flickr and you'll come up with a ton of photos exactly like yours. all shot with wide angle lenses, edited in the same way, composed the same way. i have my own style. also obviously ur criticism wasnt meant to help if this is your response to being dismissed ahaha.


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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 10 on 12/28/2015 11:12 PM >
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LMAO. please forgive me for not taking the criticisms of a 40 yr old man who describes himself as a "fedora and bow tie enthusiast" seriously... your photos are a dime a dozen for guys into urbex and they have like 3 likes each. kinda ridiculous that you get so hurt by someone saying they have a different aesthetic that you have to freak out and be like "ALL YOUR PHOTOS ARE TRASH THEY HAVE NO REDEEMABLE QUALITIES" (like are you ok? do you need anger management?) yet that photoset probably got more attention/recognition than all your flickr combined. because you have no originality and everything you do is generic and boring. you dont have your own style at all. search urbex on flickr and you'll come up with a ton of photos exactly like yours. all shot with wide angle lenses, edited in the same way, composed the same way. i have my own style. also obviously ur criticism wasnt meant to help if this is your response to being dismissed ahaha.


There's a reason you see more of his style than of your "style"





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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 11 on 12/28/2015 11:33 PM >
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ok i don't want to make this seem like any of us are attacking you, but photography is so much more than aesthetics. Sure, you can take snapshots, but that doesn't make it photography. There is still composition, and exposure and all the tiny details of making a photo. Yeah, it's easy to take an aesthetically pleasing picture, but you just took a snapshot. You have to make a photograph.

You have a good basis for shooting film. It's a rare skill to find these days- take it and run.

As for your rejection of criticism- don't blow people off. If they criticise your aesthetic, don't criticise theirs. I don't know if you're serious about photography or just want to do it to look back 30 years later, but I'm judging you're looking for improvement, being in the photo critiques. My advice is not to invalidate what others say, because they are mostly experienced photographers, who have shot/explored for years, and some even go to college for it. If you're looking for improvement- don't disregard what others have to say. You'll make no improvement. My suggestion is that you take these users advice, because as a photography student, I thought the same thing when I looked these over, if I'm being honest.

Criticism can be tough to take. But this is a situation where even if you don't agree, just smile and say thank you, and take it into consideration the next time you're behind the camera.



thanks for giving it a try
goldpeach   |  | 
Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 12 on 12/29/2015 2:36 AM >
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There's a reason you see more of his style than of your "style"




why should i copy that style if you already see so much of it then...



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
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why should i copy that style if you already see so much of it then...


Comparing snapshots to photographs is like comparing sketches to detailed drawings. Sure they're both art, but one is always going to be more impressive. If you're into sketches, good for you, but don't come to a forum asking for advice on detailed drawings if you're only intending on doing rough sketches.

They're not just different styles, they're different forms of art. You can have technically good snapshots, but a snapshot will never be as impressive as a good photograph. Snapshots look effortless and careless, something a tourist would take.

If you just want to take snapshots, you're doing a fine job. #7 looks pretty cool. If these snapshots are good enough for Tumblr, Instagram, and yourself, don't change anything. If you're happy with them, don't bother asking for advice.

But if you really want to be good at photography, learn this style of things. Use this criticism as a tool to improve. Style is something that is usually developed after you've mastered the basics.






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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
<Reply # 14 on 12/29/2015 5:30 PM >
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I like the person with boobs for knees in n5, also I love the unicorn in n9! Maybe next time try to photograph more dick graffiti? Tumblr will love it.



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
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I am going to agree with the others...these seem to just be snaps. There is a lot that goes into a photo, as mentioned. I read that you didn't know what 'composition' meant, so perhaps a bit of research into photography is needed on your part. It is not picking up a camera and pressing a button, which it looks like was done in this group.

I would suggest learning to 'light paint' and/or using reflectors/reflecting surfaces in dark rooms and long exposures, as I can see exactly where you had your light/flashlight pointed in every single one.

I would also learn to accept constructive criticism before you ask for it, and the help provided in this thread comes from some very, very, very talened artists.


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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
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Posted by goldpeach


LMAO. please forgive me for not taking the criticisms of a 40 yr old man who describes himself as a "fedora and bow tie enthusiast" seriously... your photos are a dime a dozen for guys into urbex and they have like 3 likes each. kinda ridiculous that you get so hurt by someone saying they have a different aesthetic that you have to freak out and be like "ALL YOUR PHOTOS ARE TRASH THEY HAVE NO REDEEMABLE QUALITIES" (like are you ok? do you need anger management?) yet that photoset probably got more attention/recognition than all your flickr combined. because you have no originality and everything you do is generic and boring. you dont have your own style at all. search urbex on flickr and you'll come up with a ton of photos exactly like yours. all shot with wide angle lenses, edited in the same way, composed the same way. i have my own style. also obviously ur criticism wasnt meant to help if this is your response to being dismissed ahaha.


Hahahaha wow. You really should listen to people... because you're the only one being a psychopath here... after I read your first few comments I just assumed you were a troll because holy shit... No sorry, your pictures are snap shots, not composed photography. Any little wannabecool tumblr whore can feel all warm and fuzzy because they got some likes on their shit. Okay cool, that means nothing. Enter those into some actual galleries and see the response you get. A lot of the people commenting in here are either accomplished photographers or at least have a genuine understanding of composition and design, which you do not. Having your own style is great, but you don't have style, you have a lack of understanding about photography. I have had my film work juried, judged, critiqued, and hung and I take criticism lightly and work to improve each time I receive some. I don't act like a fucking 13 year old in middle school and shit on people who try to be honest. I have seen better photographs taken by patients at developmental centers and state hospitals in their arts therapy programs.

I really like how you shit on Yokes, who is actually a phenomenal photographer and extremely knowledgeable about film, and if he tells you your shit sucks, he is right. If you ever want to have a serious chat with people who know what they're saying or at least want to just give you honest advice don't be a fucking bitch back to them. Everyone is sitting here laughing at you, and its not even because you "photography" is poor at best, but its because you act like you mean something. People like your shit on Tumblr... that isn't real life. If you are judging yourself based on "likes" on social media you are literally a moron.

But seriously thanks for the laughs, and if you choose to try slam me go ahead because I think you are legitimately a fucking riot.




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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
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Hahahaha wow. You really should listen to people... because you're the only one being a psychopath here... after I read your first few comments I just assumed you were a troll because holy shit... No sorry, your pictures are snap shots, not composed photography. Any little wannabecool tumblr whore can feel all warm and fuzzy because they got some likes on their shit. Okay cool, that means nothing. Enter those into some actual galleries and see the response you get. A lot of the people commenting in here are either accomplished photographers or at least have a genuine understanding of composition and design, which you do not. Having your own style is great, but you don't have style, you have a lack of understanding about photography. I have had my film work juried, judged, critiqued, and hung and I take criticism lightly and work to improve each time I receive some. I don't act like a fucking 13 year old in middle school and shit on people who try to be honest. I have seen better photographs taken by patients at developmental centers and state hospitals in their arts therapy programs.

I really like how you shit on Yokes, who is actually a phenomenal photographer and extremely knowledgeable about film, and if he tells you your shit sucks, he is right. If you ever want to have a serious chat with people who know what they're saying or at least want to just give you honest advice don't be a fucking bitch back to them. Everyone is sitting here laughing at you, and its not even because you "photography" is poor at best, but its because you act like you mean something. People like your shit on Tumblr... that isn't real life. If you are judging yourself based on "likes" on social media you are literally a moron.

But seriously thanks for the laughs, and if you choose to try slam me go ahead because I think you are legitimately a fucking riot.



Lmao sorry for insulting your boyfriend but i honestly cant tell what you hate more: my photography or women? anyway ill take this as a compliment from someone who considers a set of perfectly composed chairs The Best Set Ever.... seems like you and yokes are jealous that more people can connect w/ my work than yours.




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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
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Lmao sorry for insulting your boyfriend but i honestly cant tell what you hate more: my photography or women? anyway ill take this as a compliment from someone who considers a set of perfectly composed chairs The Best Set Ever.... seems like you and yokes are jealous that more people can connect w/ my work than yours.




Yep, because you take shitty pictures and can't take a simple critique from actual photographers, that definitely translates to I hate woman. Phew! I'm glad we got that one out of the way!!! And why would I be jealous of your dull point and shoot snapshots? They're on par with overdone HDR as shit that does nothing at all. And actually, I don't normally shoot many chairs, but thanks and since you are I guess the goddess of photography I'll have to go out and shoot more chairs to get on to your level. Maybe I'll even use tumblr so I can get this false sense of acceptance like you need to survive so I can feel loved again.



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Re: explored an abandoned water park! critique my photos?
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Yep, because you take shitty pictures and can't take a simple critique from actual photographers, that definitely translates to I hate woman. Phew! I'm glad we got that one out of the way!!! And why would I be jealous of your dull point and shoot snapshots? They're on par with overdone HDR as shit that does nothing at all. And actually, I don't normally shoot many chairs, but thanks and since you are I guess the goddess of photography I'll have to go out and shoot more chairs to get on to your level. Maybe I'll even use tumblr so I can get this false sense of acceptance like you need to survive so I can feel loved again.


no bcus youre a man who casually uses gendered slurs women often hear before being assaulted/raped/murdered (eg bitch, whore). i never said u shot chairs Lmfao i said your favourite photoset involved a bunch of perfectly composed chairs. maybe u should learn to read. & good luck getting ur boring generic urbex photography any recognition or attention also im laughing at the borders around your pictures like do u think this is myspace circa 2005


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