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Infiltration Forums > UE Photo Critiques > Critique- Abandoned Monastery(Viewed 1606 times)
TheLittleAlbatross location:
Boston
 
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Critique- Abandoned Monastery
< on 6/12/2015 6:01 AM >
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Hi, this is my first post on the forums. I shot these with a canon 60D with EFS17-85mm lens. I shot it handheld because I didn't have my tripod which unfortunately resulted in a lot of noise in some of the photos. I'm going back (with my tripod) in a few days and was looking for suggestions. Thanks!
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This place has the most amazing Spanish mission style architecture and all the rooms are painted in beautiful vibrant colors.


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dodger location:
San Francisco
 
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Re: Critique- Abandoned Monastery
<Reply # 1 on 6/13/2015 1:58 AM >
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The location looks great! I love that it looks so clean of graff and that the windows are still intact. Thanks for sharing the shots.

The photos are a little small so it's a bit hard to give critique on it.

I like the lines in 5 but it makes me wanting more so a wider crop might be good for that shot.

Also, the white balance in shots 2 and 3 seem a little odd but with the stained glass windows it's probably not easy to get a consistent white balance.



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Re: Critique- Abandoned Monastery
<Reply # 2 on 6/13/2015 2:25 AM >
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Watch your lines.

This



Not this





http://www.flickr.com/photos/rob666/
TheLittleAlbatross location:
Boston
 
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Re: Critique- Abandoned Monastery
<Reply # 3 on 6/14/2015 5:44 AM >
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Thanks for the advice, I always forget to check my lines, and the room is painted blue and the stained glass in that room is also blue so it is kind of a pain when trying to decide on a white balance (would probably have to do several adjustments and masks to get the ceiling white). Thanks again, the criticism is appreciated.



tiffers location:
Texas
 
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Re: Critique- Abandoned Monastery
<Reply # 4 on 6/15/2015 6:46 PM >
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I like the first one, though I'd have tried to hide the light source a little better. I also agree with Rob, make sure you're straight. ;) Leading lines and lines in general will make or break you.



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