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Infiltration Forums > UE Photo Critiques > Stalking is Modern Talking(Viewed 1820 times)
La Cigale location:
Paris, France
 
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Stalking is Modern Talking
< on 1/5/2015 1:09 PM >
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Just got back from Berlin where I spent NYE. Did a small trip out to Beelitz-Heilstätten with Cracked Œuf - it was getting dark early, but I snapped a few mediocre images. I think this was the only one I really liked. The noise was high at 800 on my D7000 and I didn't have a tripod with me so it was hand held. I worked a bit of noise reduction, but tried not to go to far as to make it look like a cartoon strip. I don't normally make images of graffiti, but I think this one was poetic and the surrounding added to it.

Camera : Nikon D7000
Lens : 14-24mm f2.8
Aperture : 2.8
Speed : 1/30
ISO : 800


So, rip it up...





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Axle location:
Milton, ON
 
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Re: Stalking is Modern Talking
<Reply # 1 on 1/5/2015 3:18 PM >
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This is what I like to see. Wonderfully framed with the graf neatly arranged in the arch, good balance and composition!

But that window on the one side, is a bit distracting, and throws off the balance. Mildly, maybe remove it in post (as much as I hate to say that).

Keep clicking!



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Indy47 location:
Tulsa, OK
 
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Re: Stalking is Modern Talking
<Reply # 2 on 4/28/2015 3:41 PM >
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Wow, you got quite a bit of light out of that shot, I'm impressed that at 1/30 it wasn't blurry. I feel that because of how interesting the text is, you could make the photo more dramatic, maybe by doing a 2.35:1 crop or catching mostly the words (don't be afraid to crop a lot away). I agree that the window frame on the right is a bit distracting.



Indy47 location:
Tulsa, OK
 
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Re: Stalking is Modern Talking
<Reply # 3 on 4/28/2015 3:43 PM >
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You could also pull the blacks down just a tad, but that's personal preference. Great work!


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