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Infiltration Forums > UE Photo Critiques > Dolly, chair and darkened skies(Viewed 1925 times)
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Dolly, chair and darkened skies
< on 10/19/2014 2:19 PM >
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Hi everyone! This is my first post here - was just looking for some feedback on some shots I took and edited yesterday - I'm all about simplicity so I shot everything with an iphone 5c and just edited and adjusted them with an app. No judgement!! Have a look and let me know what you think :)
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Re: Dolly, chair and darkened skies
<Reply # 1 on 10/20/2014 7:32 AM >
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No idea why, but i'm in love with that chair shot.



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Re: Dolly, chair and darkened skies
<Reply # 2 on 10/20/2014 7:55 PM >
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Thankyou! I have a thing for lonely chairs.



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Re: Dolly, chair and darkened skies
<Reply # 3 on 10/21/2014 1:45 PM >
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Excellent work. 1 and 3 really stand out to me, and the lighting in both shots is great.



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Re: Dolly, chair and darkened skies
<Reply # 4 on 10/21/2014 2:10 PM >
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The first photo would look better in B&W without the darkening around the corners.
The doll shot would certainly have a "creepy", up coming Halloween-feel to it if it were edited in a sepia filter. As for The Lonely Chair shot, that one is my favourite.

That is just my constructive criticism, considering that I dislike fruit phones for anti-sweatshop reasons. Kudos to you and that evil corporation phone of yours for the kewl photos.



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Re: Dolly, chair and darkened skies
<Reply # 5 on 10/21/2014 4:43 PM >
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The first photo would look better in B&W without the darkening around the corners.
The doll shot would certainly have a "creepy", up coming Halloween-feel to it if it were edited in a sepia filter. As for The Lonely Chair shot, that one is my favourite.

That is just my constructive criticism, considering that I dislike fruit phones for anti-sweatshop reasons. Kudos to you and that evil corporation phone of yours for the kewl photos.


Thanks for the critique! I actually have a copy of the doll in sepia that I like way better; but for some reason I couldn't resize without the quality degrading horrifically. Reply appreciated - I'll try some future house photos in B&W and see how they look. And yes, you can never go wrong with a lonely chair.

Also for the record, there is absolutely no denying that my phone is evil - and pocket-sized and incredibly convenient. I'm a slave to the corp.



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Re: Dolly, chair and darkened skies
<Reply # 6 on 10/21/2014 4:44 PM >
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Posted by contexxt
Excellent work. 1 and 3 really stand out to me, and the lighting in both shots is great.


Thankyou so much!



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