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All critiques welcomed!
Three separate locations - a train station (inside), a church (inside and out) and an abandoned high school (out only).
Look forward to the feedback 
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[last edit 8/17/2014 10:55 PM by ingsy - edited 1 times]
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Think you need to spend a little more time on the pictures, and the results will be much better !
My humble opinion: (as a born explorer, not photographer..i made the most shitty pictures for years)
- By example 1 and 4 are a bit tilted, you can easily adjust this in Adobe Photoshop. Try to keep lines straight if you have a frontal view
- Number 3 i would put the pillar closer and more to the left, now it's blocking the view
-Number 5 a little bit of DOF would be nice !
- Number 8 could be more interesting when you make this shot more abstract with only the tiles and handprints
- I like the colour in the pictures
Hope you like my advice and looking forward to new pictures
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| - By example 1 and 4 are a bit tilted, you can easily adjust this in Adobe Photoshop. Try to keep lines straight if you have a frontal view |
Thanks for that, i didn't notice for #1 i use photoshop and lightroom and must have been careless in adjusting this one.. #4 was more intentionally angled, maybe not the best composition though..
| -Number 5 a little bit of DOF would be nice ! |
ahh for sure - I should have opened up more manually.. i think i shot that on auto and it only opened to f11
- Number 8 could be more interesting when you make this shot more abstract with only the tiles and handprints
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i actually tried that, and the wall color was so flat.. it actually looked terrible. no shot looked good so i picked that one as my best, but you're right - although interesting in concept.. it sort of lacks anyway
Thanks a lot for the critique! I appreciate it
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Posted by Dr. Baab
Think you need to spend a little more time on the pictures, and the results will be much better !
My humble opinion: (as a born explorer, not photographer..i made the most shitty pictures for years)
- By example 1 and 4 are a bit tilted, you can easily adjust this in Adobe Photoshop. Try to keep lines straight if you have a frontal view
- Number 3 i would put the pillar closer and more to the left, now it's blocking the view
-Number 5 a little bit of DOF would be nice !
- Number 8 could be more interesting when you make this shot more abstract with only the tiles and handprints
- I like the colour in the pictures
You make awesome critiques. I love your activity here.
Hope you like my advice and looking forward to new pictures
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