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Ok. These are some pretty good shots, I love the idea. I would like to see the models interacting with their environment some more. Like the first two for example, they offer a lot of opportunity for some environmental interaction. I would also focus on getting more of the objects in the picture, see if you can get those to be the focus as well as the models (this should come naturally if they are really engaging with them).

Also pay attention to what they are wearing (I'm still trying to figure out exactly what is going on with the 4th one). Perhaps try clothes that offer a contrast or fit the scene (though I think contrasting clothes would make for a more interesting picture). It looks like the third one does the best job of this.
Overall, good photos and great idea. Can't wait to see what up come out with next.

You'd benefit from learning more about cinematographic framing of actors, which is filled with suggestions about where is appropriate to cut off a body. Here's one starting point that looks helpful.
http://masteringfi...ition-a-breakdown/
Of course it's best to take all shots as full shots so you can crop later.

My favourite shots are the three pop-up ones. The school bus one is the most striking to me, and the other two seem better framed in their settings. The compositions on the other two are less interesting. Also, is there a reason the pictures are so small?

First, I hate popups.





The second one here is the most interesting to me but I'm distracted by the crookedness. The third one has potential, but as Steed says, you've cut the model off awkwardly.


Keep it up!

Good rule of thumb: never crop at joints. A couple are crooked, were you using a tripod? You can also straighten them out in post processing. If you wanted the crooked look, it needs to be a bit more...as right now, it just looks like you weren't doing it on purpose.

I like to see that I'm not the only one who had this idea..
Your photos are pretty cool.
I took some with models in abandoned places too.
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Posted by Katharina I like to see that I'm not the only one who had this idea.. Your photos are pretty cool. I took some with models in abandoned places too. You can come and talk to me if you want :D 1. click to view 2. click to view 3. click to view 1. click to view

I think if you have a little more context of the location, the images would be a bit stronger.

Posted by randomesquephoto I think if you have a little more context of the location, the images would be a bit stronger.

You mean more photos of the place ? Without thé model ?

Posted by Katharina You mean more photos of the place ? Without thé model ?

No, with the model, but kind of giving more ideas of what the place is.

Posted by randomesquephoto No, with the model, but kind of giving more ideas of what the place is.

I did a post with more photos of the place

Posted by randomesquephoto No, with the model, but kind of giving more ideas of what the place is.

http://www.uer.ca/...urrpage=1&pp#post2