All critiques welcomed!

Three separate locations - a train station (inside), a church (inside and out) and an abandoned high school (out only).


Look forward to the feedback


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Think you need to spend a little more time on the pictures, and the results will be much better !

My humble opinion: (as a born explorer, not photographer..i made the most shitty pictures for years)

- By example 1 and 4 are a bit tilted, you can easily adjust this in Adobe Photoshop. Try to keep lines straight if you have a frontal view

- Number 3 i would put the pillar closer and more to the left, now it's blocking the view

-Number 5 a little bit of DOF would be nice !

- Number 8 could be more interesting when you make this shot more abstract with only the tiles and handprints



- I like the colour in the pictures

Hope you like my advice and looking forward to new pictures

- By example 1 and 4 are a bit tilted, you can easily adjust this in Adobe Photoshop. Try to keep lines straight if you have a frontal view

Thanks for that, i didn't notice for #1 i use photoshop and lightroom and must have been careless in adjusting this one.. #4 was more intentionally angled, maybe not the best composition though..

-Number 5 a little bit of DOF would be nice !

ahh for sure - I should have opened up more manually.. i think i shot that on auto and it only opened to f11

- Number 8 could be more interesting when you make this shot more abstract with only the tiles and handprints

i actually tried that, and the wall color was so flat.. it actually looked terrible. no shot looked good so i picked that one as my best, but you're right - although interesting in concept.. it sort of lacks anyway




Thanks a lot for the critique! I appreciate it

Posted by Dr. Baab Think you need to spend a little more time on the pictures, and the results will be much better ! My humble opinion: (as a born explorer, not photographer..i made the most shitty pictures for years) - By example 1 and 4 are a bit tilted, you can easily adjust this in Adobe Photoshop. Try to keep lines straight if you have a frontal view - Number 3 i would put the pillar closer and more to the left, now it's blocking the view -Number 5 a little bit of DOF would be nice ! - Number 8 could be more interesting when you make this shot more abstract with only the tiles and handprints - I like the colour in the pictures You make awesome critiques. I love your activity here. Hope you like my advice and looking forward to new pictures