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Let's Go Industry
< on 7/2/2014 7:40 PM >
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Some shots from a couple different sites, I hope you're not adverse to watermarks.

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2) Yay or nay on this post-processing?


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Re: Let's Go Industry
< Reply # 1 on 7/3/2014 3:51 AM >
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My first criticism would be to post less pictures at once. It's easier if you just post a few shots so we can focus on them.

Now composition wise, I don't have anything bad to say, those are all pretty good pictures. Post-prod. wise, well, it's always a matter of taste, photography is subjective and can be 'explained', but i'll go with my personal view.


1) A bit too bright. The whites are blown in a few spots, and you end up losing some detail. Just try making it darker a tad and it's almost perfect.

2) I like the idea you went for, but I think it's just a bit over the top. Decrease the saturation and darken the highlights so tag stays gritty, I think the overall vibe will be improved.

3) Cool shot, again i'd just darken the highlights a tad, but not much.

4 + 5) I can't say I'm the biggest fan of light painting, but the images are rather pleasant to me.

6 to 8) See the comments for 3). They're cool shots, I especially like picture 7), I'd just balance out the brightness a little bit so you don't have to squint when staring at your screen.




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Re: Let's Go Industry
< Reply # 2 on 10/3/2014 9:25 PM >
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7 looks a whole lot like a bathroom in Gates. Damn I wish that place was still there.




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Re: Let's Go Industry
< Reply # 3 on 10/9/2014 3:07 AM >
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Posted by fornaz
My first criticism would be to post less pictures at once.


He only posted eight.

Anyways, #2 Post processing is pretty bad in the sense that it kills depth and details in the whites and blacks. I think you might have washed them out with whatever filters you used.



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