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Re: Inside the Clocktower (Abandoned Factory) < Reply # 2 on 1/29/2019 4:49 PM > | Reply with Quote
I get why you shot it wide. There's a lot of interesting things to see. The floor perspective hurts though. Straight lines would have given this scene what it deserves. And if you could have positioned yourself without the pipe on the right cluttering the shot. Colors look good (a little green but maybe that adds to the industrialness), soft glow from clock is nice, and at full res, lots in focus to look around at.
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Re: Inside the Clocktower (Abandoned Factory) < Reply # 3 on 1/31/2019 5:59 PM > | Reply with Quote
Posted by skatchkins I get why you shot it wide. There's a lot of interesting things to see. The floor perspective hurts though. Straight lines would have given this scene what it deserves. And if you could have positioned yourself without the pipe on the right cluttering the shot. Colors look good (a little green but maybe that adds to the industrialness), soft glow from clock is nice, and at full res, lots in focus to look around at.
Thanks for the critique. I appreciate it man.
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Re: Inside the Clocktower (Abandoned Factory) < Reply # 4 on 1/31/2019 6:02 PM > | Reply with Quote
Unfortunately I didn't have a wide enough lens to capture both clock faces at once. This is the best I could do. Is this photo better or worse than my original post?
I think the framing of the mechanism itself is bad here. I cut it off at the top.
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