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NotQuiteHuman
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| | | Re: New Camera < Reply # 1 on 10/6/2014 5:54 PM > | Reply with Quote
| | | I like 1, but there is something about the perspective that is a little off. I'd try to shoot it more perpendicular to window to straighten out the lines. I may sound a little OCD here, but for me, things like that can be the difference between a good and great picture. Also maybe try a pull a little more detail from the shadows, so the decay is a little more visible. I think it would add to the mystery of the silhouette. 4 is another standout. Good composition, light, and the subject is interesting. It seems to work well in black and white too. I feel like 2, 3, 5, and 6 lack a strong subject. On 5, a close up shot of that press might be interesting with the nice window light shinning in it.
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| Baldran
Location: The Ira Bemis House Gender: Male Total Likes: 873 likes
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| | | Re: New Camera < Reply # 4 on 10/8/2014 11:23 PM > | Reply with Quote
| | | Thanks a lot for the feedback, guys! Posted by NotQuiteHuman I feel like 2, 3, 5, and 6 lack a strong subject. On 5, a close up shot of that press might be interesting with the nice window light shinning in it.
| This is definitely something I've been trying to be more conscious of lately. A lot of times, and especially when I'm shooting with a narrow lens like the 50mm, I tend to get shots that sacrifice an interesting subject for an interesting but abstract arrangement in the frame. Back when I took photography classes, my professor said that many of my pictures were too "graphic" as a result. I usually like the outcome as an abstract image, but I definitely see how the method could be better applied to more interesting subject matter, 'cause god knows there's nothing inherently interesting about the drawer on the desk in 6.
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